The genre analysis was initially confusing, then has I attempted to start a draft I started to understand the assignment better. This paper was the less intensive and I was not as productive about writing it. This was easier to write, because I felt comfortable writing the paper, and because I am a nursing major it kept me interesting. I picked to write my analysis about the nursing profession, and issues that occur in the genre.
This essay was the backbone of all the major essays, it was the starting of writing "REAL' essays. By this I mean, papers that would require planning ahead of time and need to actually understand how to write the essay. Unlike the "Literacy narrative", I could not write about stories from my past but I needed journals and articles to support my claims that I am making.
After this essay I saw my grade dramatically improve. All the articles that selected were actually "Literature reviews", so this helped me better comprehend what my teacher was looking for in future assignments. This paper helped me better understand how to actually "analysis" and not summarize material, which was something that I had struggled with.
This essay was the backbone of all the major essays, it was the starting of writing "REAL' essays. By this I mean, papers that would require planning ahead of time and need to actually understand how to write the essay. Unlike the "Literacy narrative", I could not write about stories from my past but I needed journals and articles to support my claims that I am making.
After this essay I saw my grade dramatically improve. All the articles that selected were actually "Literature reviews", so this helped me better comprehend what my teacher was looking for in future assignments. This paper helped me better understand how to actually "analysis" and not summarize material, which was something that I had struggled with.
My essay was good, but could be improved upon. I did not cite or give a definition of genre in my essay, which caused my to lose points, in addition I could have talked more about the structure of each article individually and how it relates to the goal of the profession. In my revision I will further analysis my community goals and how my articles relate to that, also I will include a definition of genre. In addition, I will work on the language and structure of my essay. I deleted how I found the articles because I did not think it was important enough for a complete paragraph but will mention it in my conclusion. Personally, I do not think that my essay had a good flow and I felt it was extremely long and there were "lengthy" paragraphs that could be shorten or deleted because they are not relevant to the goal of the essay.
Grade: 80
Grade: 80
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In this revision I added how I found my articles because I realized it was important to the paper.