Literacy Narrative
The literacy narrative was the hardest assignment for me to write, due to I am an extremely private individual and do not like to write about the details of my life. I did not receive a good grade, mostly because it was not much depth or details to it. I would rather write about something I am passionate about than to write about who I am and why am I this way.
The literacy narrative was the hardest assignment for me to write, due to I am an extremely private individual and do not like to write about the details of my life. I did not receive a good grade, mostly because it was not much depth or details to it. I would rather write about something I am passionate about than to write about who I am and why am I this way.
narrative.docx | |
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Feedback
The feedback I received for my graded assignment, I lost points from every area. The category I lost the most points from was "allusions or direct citation to genre", I never directly said who my sponsors were or what genre was. I did not do these things because I thought me directly relating the narrative to Brandt would take away from the story.
Revisions
During my revisions I will mention what genre is and sponsored that helped me, also how people reacted to "captions" helping me read. Although I did not understand how my essay did not answer the questions my teacher wrote for the category of "relevance". Hopefully my revision will fix any errors that I made.
The feedback I received for my graded assignment, I lost points from every area. The category I lost the most points from was "allusions or direct citation to genre", I never directly said who my sponsors were or what genre was. I did not do these things because I thought me directly relating the narrative to Brandt would take away from the story.
Revisions
During my revisions I will mention what genre is and sponsored that helped me, also how people reacted to "captions" helping me read. Although I did not understand how my essay did not answer the questions my teacher wrote for the category of "relevance". Hopefully my revision will fix any errors that I made.
saddlerliteracynarrative_feedback.doc | |
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narrative_revision.docx | |
File Size: | 16 kb |
File Type: | docx |